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Re: The Brotherhood: Prologue edited
Hello! This is a very interesting prologue you have, though I think it could do with some adjustments. Here are some thoughts - all this is my personal opinion, so ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hello everyone! It's literally been years since I've been back on this site. Life gets in the way, as usual, but I feel compelled to rejoin the place that helped ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: Can an Idea be an antagonist?
I agree with the above posts. Your antagonist doesn't have to be concrete, sometimes ideas, settings, and even the who you thought to be a protagonist can all be the ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: icarly: iCRASH!
This seems much too random to be funny ^^ [s] BlackGhost [/s]
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: Hauntings - A Critique Shop
Finished! Sorry it took a little while. ^^ [s] BlackGhost [/s]
Aug 30, 2008 -
Re: Murder She Drew
Hey scasha! Here's your review. ^^ It's somewhat of a line-by-line, but without the quotes. I'm trying to cut down on quote boxes because then it makes the actual critque ...
Aug 30, 2008 -
Re: All There Is [Edited 8/30/08]
I like the way you reworked it. You still get across that it's all she thinks about (seeing Saviors everywhere she goes) without making any of the situations far-fetched in ...
Aug 29, 2008 -
Re: What's in a Name, or a Title, in this case
For me, it's either I come up with a cool title and then invent a story to go with it, or I write a story and then can't think of ...
Aug 29, 2008 -
Re: Girl Without Hands: A Retelling
Thanks for noticing that. I do overuse names from time to time. :/ This was actually for a fairy tale contest, and it's a retelling of the story "Girl Without ...
Aug 29, 2008 -
Re: How it was supposed to be
This was really cool. I'm not sure why the words were arranged the way they were (intentional, I'm sure) but I liked how it was sort of reflective story and ...
Aug 29, 2008 -
Re: Welcome Back Jack!
That's awesome! Welcome back! :P I was wondering why he was red again. xD [s] BlackGhost [/s]
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: Cement Sealed Lips
Yeah, I had thought that sounded a bit out there. I changed it back to "meet", like it was before. Thanks! ^_^ [s]BlackGhost[/s]
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: Tired of LOL?
Are you tired of constantly LOL-ing all the time? Does it seem overused, overdone, and horrendously typical? Then it's time for you to amp up your internet slang with several ...
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: untitled
It seems like a start, although I'm sure you could develop this a lot more. ^_^ It's also awkward in some places, but I'm sure you can fix that by ...
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [2]
You're banned for posting at 6:43 PM. That's just wrong. [s] BlackGhost [/s]
Aug 28, 2008